We are learning to write to explain why something is important to us.
Title Why fortnite is a good game
Fortnite is a free to play game for ps4 pc xbox and mobile players. The game is a battle royal with 100 players. Last one standing wins and gets a victory royal. It is also a great game because it is creative, you can play with friends and you can even earn things when you play like dances
You can build stuff when you see another player to build battle. You can even drive from place to place if you are not next to any rifes. Rifes are things that will let you go back up in the sky and go to your next place.
When you buy the battle pass you can earn a lot of stuff like pickaxes dances and skins witch will let you get materials with a new pickaxe. You can even earn some stuff for free. If you dont bye the battle pass for $16nzd. You don't get as much but it is still worth it.
You can play online with your friends for as long as you want too. The best thing is that you can play with four of your friends in squads two in dous or just you in solos.
Fortnite is a good game but you need to watch out before you get addicted. Most people that play play for about 2hr a day. I play for 3hr a day and still spend to much money on the video game.
Thank you for reading
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Hi Izaak I can see by the way you have used words to explain how to play fortnight that you really enjoy it. You have very clear paragraphs which helps me read and organise my thinking about Fortnite this helps me enjoy fornite also. One thing that would help me as a reader is if used a precise word instead of stuff - what kind of things would you build castles, motes, forts ... using exact words helps me appreciate your writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Izaak im Dante and I like the way you put interesting words in there, by the way you put two plays at the last paragraph. remember always try your best and carry on your hard work.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Rico from Marshland School it looks like you love fortnite and so do I. Keep up the hard work and also I like the interesting words you put in it. Next time try to add maybe a picture or different colours to spice it up.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment - Izaak.
Deletegood joob izaak
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