Thursday 28 September 2017

In room 5 we have been learning to use show not tell our WALT was add interesting detail to our writing through show not tell.

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  1. I love that you have added photos to your slide showing the different ways you can half a piece of paper. Next time it would be great to check and edit your slide before posting it online.

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    1. Thank you for the helpful comment.

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  2. Hi Izaak it is Connor next time you could get same more wtiting.

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