Impact on the great walk.
I feel that the great walk will be a good idea because
you can get fit and stay healthy. But that is not all you
will also be able to try a new experience.
Firstly it will be a good way to keep on pushing yourself
to stay fit. You can also enjoy the outdoors and before you
know it you will be losing weight. Also you will not be at
home all day being bored. And that is not the best part
you can also go mountain biking with your family and
friends to have fun and hang out for the day or as long as
you go for.
Furthermore it will be a good way for shops and motels
to make money and make there company grow. If you
do go on the walk you will need food,a place to stay and
tramping gear. That is all ways for shops and motels to
make money. Also the shops in blackball are not that best
and could do with upgrades so this is there opportunity to
do that kind of stuff.
Lastly people can open their own shop and start their own
business and make it work and they have around a 70%
chance of making money. Also with new shops opening it
means blackball will get bigger and more people will go there
and spend more money.
In conclusion I think the track will be a good idea because
you can stay fit and shops can make money to make the
town bigger and better.
Kia Ora Izaak,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your writing because you link your sentences really well this makes your ideas flow and I can follow your thinking about the Great Walk.
Cheers