Welcome to my blog, I'm a learner at Greymouth High School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hello Izaak, It's great to see the choice of photos for your blog. It shows your class mates and the food preparation.
Mālō e lelei my name is Dante From Red Hill School, Thank you for sharing your Shanty Town Story with us, Could you please make the words bigger so we can read it easier.You might like to put more detail so it might sound more exciting.
Hello Izaak, It would be great to see a few more posts on your blog so that we can comment on your learning.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hello Izaak, It's great to see the choice of photos for your blog. It shows your class mates and the food preparation.
ReplyDeleteMālō e lelei my name is Dante From Red Hill School, Thank you for sharing your Shanty Town Story with us, Could you please make the words bigger so we can read it easier.You might like to put more detail so it might sound more exciting.
ReplyDeleteHello Izaak, It would be great to see a few more posts on your blog so that we can comment on your learning.
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